Y[σ]u'яє ℓu¢ky Y[σ]u мαdє ιт тнιѕ fαя (Mentor Needed)

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Torrid Paw sat on the hot rocks, heat rising around his firey sauce colored fur, his fuzzy black, dragon like ears back on his huge head as he watched the other apprentices train, his long black claws flexing. None of the other apprentices liked him, its not his fault he was larger then them and accidentally hurt them.

His Carcal fur shown in the sun as he looked blandly over the desert, his tail twitching, why was his mentor always late? The white marks under his eyes shone, his nose twitching as faint dead grasses tickled his back, white black paws

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BUMP!

[~Woodenclaw~]

"You waitin' for somebody?"

The meow came from a light brown tabby that just happened to be patrolling around the border.  He had smelt this caracal before he saw it, the taste hitting his tounge as he had stalked through the small bushes that Bloodclan now called home.  This desert was so freaking hot, his paws burned with each step he took.  Forestfire looked at this apprentice.

"Well?" He meowed, his voice harsh with annoyence.  When cats are out in the open like this, it's the same as yowling your head off to bring cats from the outskirts of Bloodclan territory to come and rip you appart. His paintence was running low with this apprentice, his long tail flicking in annoyence.  Forestfire watched the apprentice with the glwoing emerelds that were his eyes. He sat down, waiting for Torridpaw to speak.

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Torrid paw, already being about the same size as a normal warrior rose, his dragon lick ears flicking about as he nodded, taking a step back, his green eyes flashing as they locked with the warriors, his flame colored, muscle pelt rippling "Yes, sir, my mentor" He answered strongly, his pads feeling like they were being singed off

[~Woodenclaw~]

Forestfire nodded slowly, his eyes watching this apprentice.  "And who is your mentor?" He said.  As he spoke, his mouth opened to show the razors that were his teeth.  Long claws like thorns came from his snow-white paws.  This cat was a little nightmare. And an short-tempered on at that.

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Torrid Paw swallowed hard, his amber eyes blazing throughout the heat, his big ears swivling back as he leapt off the rock where he had been waiting, his black nose twitching indignantly as he stared into the toms terrifying eyes, although he let no fear show.

"I don't know his name sir, I was supposed to meet him today, I just got assigned one, I'm a new member of Blood Clan" He bowed to the elder respecfully, the hot sand boiling his huge paws as he began to slink towards camp, probably where he should be "I'll go wait closer to camp for them"

[~Woodenclaw~]

He nods and watches Torridpaw go, his green eyes looking as if they could look into a cat's very heart and soul.  'Good ridence.  At least we won't have another shredded clanmate.' He thought.  He walked next to the apprentice, tail held low, trying not to attract attention.

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Torrid Paw crept into camp, wedging his huge carcal shoulders through the entrance awkwardly and stumbling through in a cloud of sand, his muscles rippling, he showed potential to become a great guard, if only he had someone to train him.

His dragon like ears rotated eerily and his amber eyes blazed with determination as he sat and waited seemingly agonizing hours under the boiling orange sun, its flames almost the same color of his saucey pelt.

"God how long can I wait...My fur will be bleached white by the time this cat showes up" he snarled, baring huge, yellowed fangs under his breath, his cream stomach growling

OCC: Do you have a cat that could be my little carcals mentor?? I'm new to this clan so I don't know the customs too well 

[~Woodenclaw~]

(Forestfire or Poisonfang could be a mentor.)

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Could Poisionfang be his mentor? And sorry for my sucky posts, my muse has been so low, by the by, Im Tattoogaze, or I used to be, most people call me Tatz or Pookz 

[~Woodenclaw~]

(Okay, and sure. Poisonfang can be the mentor)

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Torrid Paw curled in the sand, practically immersed in it he had been waiting so long, the carcass of a rabbit laying next to his pointed, dragon like ears and the white rims under his golden eyes blazing with bordum. A spikey cactus grew with white thorns and scratched his back next to him, but the muscular carcal didn't care.

Perhaps they thought I didn't deserve a mentor, a carcal like me wasn't good enough He thought sourly, lifting his black nose when he caught a scent drifting on the dry air

[~Woodenclaw~]

"Hey! Are you Torridpaw?"

The mew came from a muscular black tom who washing himself in the Bloodclan cat.  His eyes were like two yellow moons that watched all that went on around him.  His claws glinted like knives in the sunlight, ready to kill.  The tom padded over, his large paws made dust fly up around his paws. "Well?"

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The huge carcal looked up, the white and black lines under his eyes flaring. His orange saucey pelt rose in rage, his huge carcal paws scuffing as his dragon ears flattening "I've been waiting for two hours for you to show up!"

He yowled, rising to be about the same size as the normal cat, his amber irises glittering in the heat

[~Woodenclaw~]

"Well, excuse me for having to provide for the clan." He muttered.  "Anyways, are you ready?"